It was too fast. I agree with Neeckin, who said on e-hentai: “Billy did not even get to do anything, they might as well have just got up and shot him in the head”
I know, but there will be things that would have to be done faster, so far several readers appointed that the whole Superman / Shazam was too long.And I need to move to the sexy part.
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It was too fast. I agree with Neeckin, who said on e-hentai: “Billy did not even get to do anything, they might as well have just got up and shot him in the head”
Trust me, it was shorter.
I believe, but one additional page would make this scene better.
I do not demand, i just say my opinion.
I know, but there will be things that would have to be done faster, so far several readers appointed that the whole Superman / Shazam was too long.And I need to move to the sexy part.
billy barton say shazam aka captain marvel cause of death get fucking and kissing killed off screen by mary marvel and supergirl share the kill now